This is before the critique. Jason's critique was ( as usual ) right on the money. The largest criticism on this one was that I made some of the values too dark..and that the darks were a little too dark in general. I have to agree with that, because after he painted over it, I saw exactly what he meant. I'm still fairly pleased with this one, but as with any work, there is always room for improvement...and I'll hate it next week. :)
One of the things I love about this course is looking at everyone else's critiques as well. What a treat, because I've learned as much from the work of the other students as I have from my own.
6 comments:
Patrick, your painting of citizen gary turned out real good. I like it! It's great to see all the classmates do a value painting on the basis of the same sketch.
Great Job Patrick!
Hey great work Patrick! I struggled a bit with this assignment so it's been really helpful to see how others approached it - awesome!
That's really good, Patrick... I took Bobby Chiu's course and it looks like you're having as much fun in Jason Seiler's class as I did in Bobby's!!!
Thanks folks. Let's see some MORE posts. C'mon, get yer work up on here. :)
Jeff: I am having a lot of fun, and it's making me want to take the other schoolism courses as well. In my line of work, I think I'll benefit from Stephen Silver's course first, and then I'm planning on taking Bobby's. But eventually, I'll get around to all of them, hopefully.
Great painting.
I took Bobby Chiu's class and It was a great experience. I learn a lot from the other student work as well.
Keep up the good work.
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